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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
Vision: is there I would say... It's not the most original concept, but overall the capture is just about right, from a good angle and the blurred berry in the background doesn't seem too much much of a problem.
Technique: is okay, but I wonder how would it look the focus was on both of the berries?
Also, the focus is a little wonky; I believe you aimed at the closest parts, but they turned out a little blurred - same about the leafs at the top, they could've been a little blurred.
The berry in the background could easily be photoshoped out, but I think it was a good choice to have it there - otherwise there would be too much negative space.
Impact: is definitely there. I think that as a whole, the photograph is amazing and I was in love with it straight away - the mix of cold and warm colours and the frost on the top of it are a brilliant subject, love it
By the way, I wonder how it would look in black and white; I think it could be interestingly executed )))
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